Friday, October 9, 2009

The product of today's work

I wrote a lot in class today. These are my two favorites:

He creates love every night
Sometimes with women, sometimes without
His creations of love always make things right

-which eventually lead to...

The jumping mega man has his head on a pillow
Bodies in the closet
A fresh woman's heels at the door

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2 comments:

  1. Luke DeLalioOctober 9, 2009 at 5:56 PM

    Now, why is that second one so totally working and great? Can you figure out why it is working so damn well?

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  2. Becky GraceOctober 18, 2009 at 10:14 AM

    You get an image in your head when you read it. And its also ends with a "..." you want to know what happens next

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